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Tuesday, January 11, 2011

LIVING SLOWLY TO FEEL THE LIFE


In our life, we sometimes live quickly and forget the existence of our family, friends, relative and so on. In that time, we will feel tired, lonely and may be bored. So, we should live slowly to fell the life and we will see our life more beautiful and plentiful than. If you fell happy, you will succeed.^^








I hope you can have happy in the life.

12 comments:

  1. Hix, you have grammaticaly mistakes again.
    You must learn to use your grammar correctly.

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  2. the topic is very meaningful. The presentation is scientific and also eye-catching. But sentence structure you used are quite simple.Ex: The hasty life seem make us forget...
    You should note some small error. ((feel NOT fell)).
    I realy like your Key sentence. " Happiness will give you success/ Biggest success is having the perfect happiness/ The final destination of efforts is a complete happiness..."
    Wishing you a happy and peaceful life!!!

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  3. thk you so much and I hope you can aslo get it if you relly want.

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  4. @Mr.English: Thank you so much. Although something still remained in your post but its meaning is very good and meaningful. I hope your blog will be brought to the public, and so everyone can read your topic and understand the meaning you let in it.

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  5. You should write, write more and more and wait patiently. So your blog will be known more...

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  6. Wish you have a happy Tet holiday with your family...

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  7. happy new year to bloger

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  8. i very want to Develop my skill English, Who can you help me? Where should i begin, how to effect.....? I like it, but i spend time for do it very litte.

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  9. in the my life, may be the happened storys to me fell sad.but we still trying to cross it. /........

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  10. Mọe, mấy thanh niên thủ dâm tinh thần vl :v

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